Wednesday, January 24, 2007

David Oh

Blog 4


Haley was a high school student and daughter of wealthy parents. She knew that it was wrong when she was copying the paper. The worse thing was that she plagiarized because of her neglect. However Marita was the university student but her home education prevented her from think creative so she need other materials to wrote her paper and she had not knew that she was plagiarizing. Jamal was a middle school student who lived in Bronx. He was good at writing but he turn over the paper which is not his original work.


Jamal who lived in Bronx had a chance to admission to the private school Mailor-Callow as a scholarship student. However, his English teacher had a prejudice to him. Therefore the teacher treated Jamal harsh and tried to find out his faults. For that reason, Jamal should always handed over the good paper and that made him to do a plagiarism.

1 Comments:

Blogger 106 Composition Blog said...

David,

You make some good judgments about the three students in these stories, also your opinion about Crawford seems reasonable.

As far as grammar, you have some incorrect verb forms and prepositions.

5:08 PM

 

Post a Comment

<< Home